Thanks everyone for listening and taking the time to comment.
124 - at the time I deliberately put a syncopated snare hit in just to break the predictability of the beat up a little. However, all my work will be getting re-done once I get my new gear sorted out and there is a good chance the drums will be getting a major overhaul. Cheers for listening and your comments.
cgiles - originally this song was very much a stripped back piano and guitar. I'm never happy and always end up adding bits and pieces, hence how this had a few tracks added. You obviously would have preferred the original mix without the drum. Personally, I like it but like the above they'll all be getting re-done and I'm sure it'll sound quite a bit different once I'm finished. Thanks for your comments and opinion though. I take everything onboard anyone says to me regarding my material.
Jez and Tony - cheers for the kind comments. Thanks a million.
Ian - That's my thinking with regards an arranger. Just something to quickly get, at least, an idea in to reality with a song structure in place. I'm looking to get a new arranger and a Korg Krome so between checking the bank balance and getting a chance to try the likes of the Krome and 950 instore I hope to get sorted as soon as possible. Thanks again for your comments regarding my song writing.