Give me a birthday present, how 'bout it... your time! All you fine folks, would sure appreciate honest feedback on this. I recorded it upon first waking this morning, literally one take, no warm up, so it's not a very good recording, but good enough to get the song across. What do you think of this, does it strike you in any way good or bad?

LINK:
http://soundcloud.com/bill-pittman/fifty-nine-and-holdin