Hi Earl, the country and western piano fills were pretty darn good!

Voice was "pitchy" at spots but over all your carried the tune.

For me (maybe because I'm drummer) the timing issues were the number one distraction. Somehow you got the beat turned around and was it very apparent when the drum fills were ending on beat 3 instead of beat 1. In my opinion the most important thing for a musician to know is where beat one is. Always know where is beat one! Most keyboards have some kind of indicator like a light that flashes on beat one.

Although I hated it at the time, I think high school marching band was one of the most important things that developed my playing. Having to mark time with the feet really helped me. I wish I could have gone to a Black gospel church growing up to learn to clap on 2 and 4... I seen some of those church folk be able hold it all down with their amazing tambourine playing and hand clapping, no need for a drummer!

Anyways, thanks for posting!