Life With Love And You

This is a love song, slow piano ballad.

Please let me know what you think of this song. As a songwriter, I *must* have feedback. I have, literally, hundreds of original songs written. If you don't think this (or any of mine) are good, just say so. You won't hurt my feelings. As a songwriter, I'm used to it! Honest feedback is what I seek.

This is a work demo, unfinished.

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Bill
Yamaha PSR2000

[This message has been edited by SemiLiveMusic (edited 07-25-2006).]

Bill
As you said, it's is a rough working mix, that aside, I thought the melody was excellent.Lyrics were great. I think you should consider doing it in a country genre, as that is immediately what I heard and think the concept, style and lyrics are made for it.

The vocals were off by a semi tone here and there but overall, I found myself singing along to it.
jam on,
Terry

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jam on,
Terry http://www.musicchops.com/forums/



[This message has been edited by trtjazz (edited 09-06-2005).]

It is a nice song, as you know. But... as you prefer opinions about how to do it better
I'd say that, in my opinion:
-volume of accomp. is sometimes too much low (or your voice is too much present).
-accompan. is nice but something repetitive. In this sense, I would change it a few in chorus, and I would add some drums too in this part of song. Or perhaps another style would be better in this song.
Your voice is great and have feeling and richness. Yes, sometimes a semitone more or less here or there, but nobody is perfect.