Scott, your link is making the page super-wide! You could use UBB code or
http://www.tinyurl.com to fix it.
Beachbum, good vocal. If I were making any comment to improve it, the drums sound weak to me. Tweak that and it would be a lot more lively.
BTW, just as a FYI, I listened on headphones and I hear sporadic distortion. On my recordings, this means the recording signal was too hot. But take that with a grain of salt because my audio setup is not ideal.
Good luck!
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Bill
Yamaha PSR2000