Someone here in SZ stated that a good vocalist has to spell the words clearly, like Frank Sinatra did.
Donny, you did just that, and I could understand the lyrics, almost first time. Very good voice, I like it!
You could also publish the song in 96 or 128 Kbits/ 44,1KHz, it would have been much better. The quality was a little low now and I could hear some compression artifacts, especially with the reverb in the end of vocal phrases, containing "esses"