Dp 24 has lot of good edit tools on board I baught a video it helped you csn go online there are you tube vids to help
I would bring in more bass line in the mix and back off the synth loop a bit it has good potential bring foward the vocal a bit have the synth loop i like it just have it in the backround a bit more .
good job
Ron
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