Nice job J - I've seen this before, and it still holds up. I have one teeny suggestion for you ... the last key change is exciting, and your voice really carries it, but the track stays constant. I'd recommend pumping the energy of that last chorus so you can really feel the extra push. If I was in the band backing you up, that's how I'd react when you really slam the ending home! Bravo, my friend. Well done, you.
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