Don ... instead of you ASKING for EQ help, you should be providing it ...
I didn't think Donny's EQ was 'tinny', but I personally enjoyed the more mellow sound of your original ...
The thing about sound is that it is
SO subjective ... I don't think ANY two humans are going to hear EXACTLY the same thing due to even the slightest difference in hearing ... some people are going to pick up more highs than others who might pick up more lows ...
That's one of the reasons I get such a kick out of the 'debates' on this forum about the sounds of different KBs ...
I don't know what you are hearing, and you don't know what I am hearing, and NONE of us know what the audience is hearing ... just trust what sounds good to YOU, and hope that your audience is hearing the same thing ...