Hi Tony:

Just returned from a routine visit to my Doctor... sorry for the delay. Materials request was E-mailed to you a moment or two earlier.

----Dave

As Tony said, "good foundation". There ARE a couple of 'foundation' problems, ie. timing of some of the chord changes, the 'resolving chord', etc. but I'm sure Tony will point them out (and they are EASILY correctable). I only critiqued the song structure, not the lyrics (which I'm sure are excellent).
Good luck.

chas

Hi Chas:

Thanks for dropping by. Thankfully, I'm not a performer like most of you guys. By the time I've finished recording, editing, etc., it's on to the next one. I seldom sing a song often enough to get the timing down very well... but getting the point of the song across is usually the best I can do. Practice, practice, practice... wish I were younger, LOL! Without an Arranger KB... I would have restricted myself to "lyrics only" many moons ago.

All the best, ----Dave

Newest version link:

https://soundcloud.com/user-918315765/an-evening-in-vermont

Thanks, but I am out on the boat. No music gear. Maybe in a couple weeks.

Gary

Did you per chance pass Pea Patch Island as you navigated into the Delaware via the channel? Hope the weather and winds are perfect for sailing. Above all, be careful. The song will be here when you get back. Thanks for noticing. ----Dave

Thanx for the update Dave...
Keep going Dave a work in progress is never ending
but can be very fruitful in may ways along the journey.