I am trying to choose songs to record in studio. I just wrote this. Recorded on Zoom H4 using internal mics (tweaked in Kristal), sung live. Let me know what you think of this song, I need feedback. Love it, hate it, whatever do you think? I'm a serious songwriter, I can take it if you don't like it, I appreciate people taking time to give honest opinions.

Do you think this song will connect for people, as written? (The writing, not the recording, which is just a rough demo, done live.)

Hear the song, "Mama." A folk song.
http://www.ttmbandroom.com/Bill_Pittman/audio.php