Tony, overall a very nice beat and feel. Terrific drumkit sparkle (crashes, fills).
I don't know what it sounds like thru yours (and other peoples) speakers, but thru my Cambridge SoundWorks computer speakers, the 'kick drum' and/or 'bass guitar' volume distracts from Lucy's vocals & making out the lyrics very clearly. Unless it's just my computer sound system, I recommend lowering the aforementioned instruments in the mix.
btw: Tony, when I heard 'Freedom Train' I was able to tell right off that 'you' wrote this song , because you've now developed a song writing style distictively recognizable as yours, a good thing of course
I think Lucy has a distintively unusual & uniquely memorable sounding voice, the type that record producers are always looking for to showcase a 'new' artist & sound. Curious where (what Country/region) Lucy hails from. Wishing you both the best in your song collaberation efforts.
Scott