Hi folks...
I need some help on the solo parts of this song. I posted this song a week or so back and the solo parts where the major concern... So I'm re-doing it but would like some help on which path to follow...

This is a small download as it is just the intro and will set the tone for the breaks and solos...

The first one I like a lot, but it's to hard rock I think.. [url=Http://chipos.com/beachbum/1.mp3][url=Http://chipos.com/beachbum/1.mp3][url=Http://chipos.com/beachbum/1.mp3]Http://chipos.com/beachbum/1.mp3[/url][/url][/url]

The next is ok but it blends better with the verse music... http://chipos.com/beachbum/2.mp3

It seems the more I write stuff the more complex it gets... and the more time it takes...
Thanks to anyone who responds...
DJ

miss spell a word and a an edit will follow
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dj
#2 sounds much better to me.
Terry

BTW, the more and more you do it the easier it becomes really. What was hard last week is a no brainer and this week it's a new challenge. Same with kyric writing, at least for me.

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