Well, What the heck. Here's my version. mistakes and all. T2 with onboard style.
(I know...terrible ending)
babylon

http://www.box.net/shared/vh6cyp4g91

OK ... I liked the organ in the background ... is that part of the style, or you playing it as a LH voice?

I'm not crazy about the tempo ... seemed a little too slow and I think that may have messed up your meter/phrasing ...

JMHO ...
t.

Jerry - Good to see that you made the deadline and also figured out how to post. I hope you don't mind that I kind of hijacked your thread and moved it over to the eJam thread - I just wanted you to be part of the big picture.
I thought you did a great job on the song. I too want to know about that organ LH. Is that part of the style - what style and what keyboard? Thanks for posting, for sure.

If it's not too much to ask, could any other comments please check the eJam page 8 first, and maybe place your comment there.