Here's my latest original, if anyone has a comment, good or bad, it's appreciated.

Sorry, again, it's just me and acoustic guitar.

Flat here and there, rushed here and there, yuck, but I was concentrating on playing the guitar and forgot about concentrating on the vocal. (Recorded live, one track, into Zoom H4, tweaked in Kristal software.)
http://www.ttmbandroom.com/index.php?t=audio_player&song_id=1103

Well done. Great vocal sound. I like the previous couple of songs you wrote better though.
DonM

Say what you will, Bill... you have a unique vocal style. I really enjoyed this song and hope you will "pitch it" to somebody who has the financial resources to push it to the charts. I would think a Neil Diamond type artist would work well. Simple, honest and a beautifully structured song.

Dave Rice http://www.ShowCaseYourMusic.com/DaveRice/

Another great one Bill.

Gary