Not my kind of music, but the remix needs to be worked on a bit. Sounded, at least from my perspective, that your vocals needed to be a bit more upfront, maybe about 15-percent more volume so they're not overpowered by the accompaniment. Over the many years I've listened to your submissions, though, you vocals seem to have improved a lot. They're far more polished than just a few years ago, smoother sounding.
Cheers,
Gary
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