Don, what impressed me most was that you looked after the little details...this was no shoddy thrown together recording...I don't waste my time listening to (or commenting on) music where the performer/player couldn't be bothered to look after the details; to me, it's literally lack of respect for their own talent, as well as the intended listener.
You are obviously genuinely (more likely, passionately) dedicated to producing the best quality product you can, and even though the subject matter is not something I subscribe to, I can certainly appreciate dedication to producing quality work, and your ability to make the most of your instrument.
To me, the sounds you used, and the arrangement itself, evoked almost contrasting feelings of both mystery and hope.
Again, it is good work.
Ian
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