Hi Gary:

Thanks for sharing your first song. It certainly has a "nautical feel" to it and I enjoyed my listen. Improvements? Just so you'll know, I've never written a song that could not be improved... but eventually, you have to "come up for air" and let the "chips fall where they may!"

Here's wishing you the best in your song-writing career and your health issues. Let's face it, most of us here are not spring Chickens (except for Mason) and life's challenges provide us with opportunities to overcome them and continue to enjoy the rest of our individual adventures. ----Dave Rice

Hi Gary for your first song you did a great job I enjoyed listening to it hope you feel better soon. Cal

Thank you all for those wonderful and inspiring words. The individuals on this forum have been the inspiration to do many things during my musical career and without this forum, I'm confident that I would not have succeeded to the point I have thus far. I only wish I had a few more years and the health go continue on stage.

Thanks again, everyone for all your encouragement over these many years,

Gary

Sounds like me. In my case it's blood sugar.