Bb,
First, I hear quite a difference in sound quality. the instruments sound more even toned and that they are all playing in the same room, to me in the mix. The vocals still sound a bit as though they are in a different presence though. Here's why I think....you're using more reverb effect on the vocals and too much less or none on the band.
So, add perhaps half as much effects to the band as you do the vocals and I think it will pull it all together. Here's what I do to try to get all instruments/vocals etc to have the right dynamics one to the other in the mix. My first pass through for the final mix, I listen at a very low volume, through speakers NOT through headphones. If one thing is too loud to the other, it will stick out like a sore thumb. Here's something else you can do to make it all sound more real.....almost nothing should be directly centered in the mix. The best way to explain this is: if you listen through headphones and the sound seems like it is directly in the center of you head, pan it a bit one side or the other. As a general rule here's how I pan....drums and percussion on 2 tracks are panned hard left and hard right. That will fill all the back space as drums would do if you were watching a band live. Then picture where the other players would be in the band if you were watching them live....perhaps the guitar player would be a little off to the left, so pan the guitar a little left, bass right, vocals one way or the other or split one track a little left, the other a little right. If you go back and overdub a vocal harmony, pan it to the right or left.
This is another tune that I very much like your style, lyrics and theme. I particularly like the line "why do sinners get saved."
I like the accmp. tracks you're starting to use and it is starting to round out your work. The more you keep heading in this direction the better it's going to get.
What's really happenin' for you right now on the journey is the great leaps in improvement from one tune to the next.
Very nice indeed.
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jam on,
Terry
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